I am going to write about a person that inspires me. This person is my mom, Tracy. She has many characteristics to describe her. She is helpful, hardworking and humorous. She has many more traits than this, but I will tell you about these.
I consider her hard working because she has a good job. She has worked very hard her whole life to get this job. She currently is a dispatcher for the county. A dispatcher is when someone calls 911 and she answers the phones. When she answers the phones, she has to stay calm and help people through their problems. It’s really cool to watch her work with all of the different computers and information.
I also consider her humorous. Almost everyday we are always laughing and joking around about stuff. This is her trait that inspires me the most. She passed this one down to me. I think that she got this from my grandma too. She is always fun to be with, even though she is sixty some years old, she drives go-karts and stuff like that.
She is very helpful too. Whenever I need help with homework, she tries her best to help me. Some family and friends of hers needed her to sew stuff back together, and she gladly accepted. During concerts for orchestra, or field trips for school, my mom likes to chaperone.
So overall, I would say that my mom is a good person. She has many traits that I hope I will get when I get older. She is really fun to hang out with.
I hope I will get a good job when I grow up. My goals are to get into a good college and get an exceptional job. To achieve these goals I plan on getting a good education now and working hard like my mom has. The trait that I would need for this is hardworking and smart. My inspirational message to offer others about pursuing their educational goals, never give up. This is very important because if you give up you will never get anywhere. Another one could be is try your hardest every day. If you don't try you wont get into a good college, or even graduate highschool.
Tuesday, February 9, 2010
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1. I liked that you wanted to use your mom as in example of what you want to be. It had a good flow and it sounded nic
ReplyDelete2. What tpye of college do you want to go to?
3. If this was my paper I would make it a little long, I like to write and think you have a good start on how to explain your mom.
I liked all of the information on why you look up to her. What is a dispatcher (I know, others do not). If this was my paper I would make the paragraphs longer, instead of having only 2 sentences each
ReplyDeleteI really liked reading this essay type thinger. I also find your mom's job really cool. Does she have to stay really calm talking to the person on the other end of the line? I think you did a great job, and I wouldn't change much to it.
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