Monday, November 16, 2009

character part 2

All three of the girls in the book are dynamic. I think Zoey has changed the most. She let Maddie dare her to do things she would’ve never done before. The first dare was to go up to someone besides Maddie or Angela and say, “shut the hell up!” and mean it. Second, she had to super glue inappropriate bumper stickers to her old English teacher’s car during church. Last, she had to glue marshmallows to her nipples. Second, she had to super glue inappropriate bumper stickers to her old English teacher’s car during church. Last, she had to glue marshmallows to her nipples and run around the mall twice. Zoey has let herself be more comfortable doing stuff with Doug. They’re now dating and very serious about it too. Before Zoey wouldn’t do anything that could get her in trouble. But she actually got caught with Doug at her house.
Second, we have Maddie. She had to have one dare herself. That dare was to tell Clive how she really feels about him This was very hard for her to do because she can't really open up about that kind of stuff. But, one night she was hanging out with Clive and they were out of pot. So Maddie and this other boy went down this alley, but she made her friend get it. She didn’t know that the guys selling pot were undercover cops so they got caught and went to the police station. Maddie got in trouble for not having her license and her friend for buying the pot. So the rest of her friends and Clive showed up at the police station and Maddie just told him. But he’s going out with Whittney. Maddie tried a lot of pot in this book, but she never liked it. She was just showing off for Clive. She actually decided to quit.
Last, we have Angela. She was forced to move with her family to California with her mom and sister because her dad lost his job. She was very depressed from this. She thought about cutting herself, but she would never do that. She is still a baby about some things. She has to have a special pillow so she doesn’t hear her own pulse when she sleeps. She bought this bracelet that says believe. She started believing in little things like that after she moved.

1 comment:

  1. Yikes, I wouldn't take any of those dares! Here, I'd pull out specific traits from the beginning and specify them again in the end. you've got the support down to show the change.

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